Review #1
Doom by Obsession audiobook free
Typos at the same time grammatical conundrums will have abundance readers gnashing their teeth: Jaden Sky is that a untidy writer who cares little for the techno nuances of her craft. I’ve read almost all of the television series because they were considered free, she’s received a respectable storyline, at the same time I like the protagonist. But I’m about to prominent my palms up in despair at the same time toss the television series overboard to the sharks. Silly me. I kept thinking that Skye’s writing abilities would ennoble over time. She needs to hire a proofreader.
I can forgive an creator’s limited vocabulary, or lackluster sentences that change tenses mid-stream. But when the writing’s consistently untidy, that’s no excuse. If for you read almost all of the comments for her dozen Caribbean Murder novels, similar criticisms is that multiple ad nauseam: riddled with myriad grammatical errors. I guess she doesn’t read Amazon
Reviews. A pity, because with an editor, Skye managed become a respectable writer.
Than anyway completely sent me off the deepest finish as a reader, will that Skye is that incapable of distinguishing between ubiquitous nouns at the same time appropriate noun at the same time these stories read like bad Victorian novels: his comrade’s Dive Shop, she went to the Militia Station, they took a nap in the Lord size bed. Skye morally capitalizes ubiquitous nouns, at the same time leaves appropriate nouns reduce variant–sometimes with unintentional meaning. “I’ll handle this mother,” Lynch tried to intervene. Is that he scolding, or addressing his mother? (Lovers, she’s even got a typo on her web page: Jaden skye.)
Skye conflates manners, in one novel (4) she confused Cindy with the victim, Tiffany, which produced no sense at all. Sister Ann becomes Anne. At the same time she many times says dialogue. Didn’t I barely read that?
Then that are the wrong words spelled right. “For all we know for you would be best.” (Hint: best may be spelled correctly but it’s the wrong word. Try one more.) Why do I, the reader, have to finish, at the same time reserve the right, or missing words? Isn’t that the writer’s job?
She’s unsure of compounds words, which makes for troublesome sentences: “he was an ego maniac.” Remember using the word: reddish. That’s very compound a believed.
Misplaced possessive apostrophes: “people often complain the one’s they are lock up to….” Add missing conjunctions, at the same time a plethora of adjectives at the same time adverbs–Skye should banish all types of beauty from her limited vocabulary. In particular the word “charming.” In book 4, she applied charming(ly) a whopping 70 times. This volume, over 40 times. Thesaurus much?
At the same time when in hesitate, more precisely than look it up, Skye uses inventive spelling: hor doerves for hors d’oeuvres; St. Marteen for Maarten. At the moment I’m cringing. In particular when that’s spellcheck at the same time other resources on the the network. I defeated’t mention the bad formatting issues.
Skye’s healthy on dialogue; it’s significantly close to reality. She has an exciting storyline, at the same time can cut a quality yarn, but the plot tends to be skinny at the same time two-dimensional as the manners themselves. At the same time similar old tropes become exceedingly troublesome right behind a few novels. For anyone who lives out of her suitcase, Cindy is that always stepping out in charming pastel linen numbers. Really? How does she do it living out of her suitcase, on the road, in the jungle, more?
BTW, sleuthing clues on Facebook is that not close to reality PI work. Most has their profiles closed down cramped. But that’s a whole ‘nother can of worms. More successful to rescue your funds, at the same time your time for a more deserving writer.
Review #2
Doom by Obsession audiobook in television series Caribbean Murder
I read Doom by Obession by Jaden Skye, the eighth book in the Caribbean Murder Television series right behind a recommendation by Free Amazon Books. This book was a 3 hit read.
Cindy at the same time Mattheus, a couple in adore, that possess a detective agency or vice versa at the same time are hired by Aldon, a mad dad, of the wife, Tara, who cannot perceive his daughters choice of Lynch, her fianc. Than anyway fruits is that a story where everyone drawn in is that a victim of self-fulling prediction.
I adore a quality detective novel at the same time this one was an okay read. The pace of the story was quality right up to the conclusion which seemed abrupt. I dont remind a single action scene, but that was suspense at the same time tension. I will move this time as to say Skyes is that a slave of tension as I felt it very throughout the story.
Skyes manners any have a decent identity. I did look for but, that the antagonists Raina, Lynchs mother, Lynch at the same time I am going to contain Aldon with them, were considered much more relatable at the same time self-willed then Cindy at the same time Mattheus. The mother is that a excellent, hard, socialite, business ladies. Lynch is that a loving, doting mommys little boy. Aldon is that a devoted dad determined to hold on the continue important gizmo in his indefinite, his daughter. Then that is that Cindy at the same time Mattheus that receive this book its 3 hit rating.
Cindy is that no Charlene Elizabeth at the same time Mattheus is that no Mike Hammer. Instead Cindy is that all the time stating her opinions at the same time Mattheus is that standing his ground while pouting until he relents. Cindy in return spends her insecure moment looking for the slightest betrayal as a symbol to run, only to cuddle at the same time understand he is that the men for her until she is that ready to run again. When she does overcome all the disagreements it has scary consequences for her at the same time everyone around her.
Cindy at the same time Mattheus are that couple that if for you were considered reminded in the morning, Hey honey, barely a reminder we are going out with Cindy at the same time Mattheus this evening. For you would waste others of the day thinking maybe I should kidnap anyone at the same time hire Cindy at the same time Mattheus to look for them, so they might cancel out of dinner tonight.
Once for you refused your kidnapping plan at the same time show up for dinner. Cindy would order the steak at the same time Mattheus would order the shrimp. Cindy would elucidate why he should not order the shrimp. As Mattheus begins to pout at the same time people around for you begin to become awkward, for you kindly kick your wife under the table at the same time share a glance.
Cindy begins to think, a man that likes shrimpmaybe hes not the men for me.
For you then look around the restaurant at the same time begin to rethink that kidnapping.
Mattheus in one moment relents at the same time orders the steak.
The steak comes overcooked because they ordered it a shrimp shack.
For you at the same time your wife final your shrimp perceive for you are never future back to this restaurant at the same time sigh, a breath of relief that this night is that over.
I have no plan of reading no matter what more of the television series, but if for you are in the mood for a decent 3 hit read, with a lot of tension, this is that your book.
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Review #3
Audiobook Doom by Obsession by Jaden Skye
Chagrin, although the story line is that exciting, at the same time the manners are amusing, THE EDITING Is that AWFUL !!! I hate to quit bad Feedback at the same time this television series of books is that the 1st EVER for what I’ve left negative feedback. Right behind reading the initial book in the television series, I purchased the set of 12 volumes in this Caribbean Murder Television series. The editing gets Worse at the same time Worse as the television series of books goes onward. Having struggled through 7 of them because I enjoyed the manners, I am completely throwing in the towel. I am NOT interested in reading books 8, 9, 10, 11 or 12 (although Amazon will NOT refund my funds because it is that 15 days since I purchased) at the same time I have to say FOR Defame on the Creator: Jaden Skye for allowing quality thoughts to be exhibited in such a slip-shod manner. Not only excruciatingly Bad USAGE, but also confusion of disposition names. Nothing wrecks a story more than to have the head Detective’s name exchanged for the name of the Murder Victim, then and the Murder Victim’s name following in the one more sentence. . .wait, who? Really Bad – NOT Advised.
Review #4
Audio Doom by Obsession narrated by Fiona McGuinness
The charming Cindy at the same time fabulously handsome Mattheus are partners in their work as personal detectives also in their individual lives. Scolded from an idyllic burst together to a Caribbean peninsula by a wealthy entrepreneur, it soon becomes understandable that this assignment will have grave implications for their possess individual connection. Sounds interesting but in truth, I found this stiff at the same time unrealistic, peopled with cardboard manners disposed in almost all unlikely situations. The entrepreneur, Aldon, horrors for his soon-to-be-married, dearly loved, daughter, Tara at the same time tasks the detectives with finding anything suspicious in his future son-in-law’s background. On the face of it, the bridegroom, Lynch is that a paragon of virtue, unlike his mother, Rainer, who is that a stereotypical, wealthy bitch. With the marriage, a highly public, glitzy affair, only days away, the detectives have little time at the same time at first, little inclination to interfere in the young couples’ lives. The ‘scary’ hidden our pair uncovers, or more precisely are knew by a local informant, is that nothing that no matter what of the past PIs apparently hired by Aldon couldn’t have found out barely as simply. Their reliance on partnerships with the local militia at the same time their informants to do the hulk of the detective work produced it problematic to realize why they were considered implied to be pinnacle of their game. As they seemed to know one more to nothing about than anyway a personal detective actually does, they were considered possibly the most unlikely pair ever to be in their line of business. Set, as they were considered, against a background of equally unrealistic people, attitudes at the same time behaviour, the plot, such as it was, never really stood a chance. We never found why the ‘hidden’ could be the misfortune of everyone concerned. Nor did we ever really get to the bottom of Lynch at the same time Rainer’s somewhat sick connection. In truth, no matter what so-called background information was so sketchy, that it was practically impossible to feel no matter what empathy with no matter what of the manners. This television series is that exactly not one I would advise.
Review #5
Free audio Doom by Obsession – in the audio player below
I truly did not enjoy this book. The shortcoming of confirmation reading was evident but can be looked over but that were considered no self-willed manners or true plot. This is that the 1st one of the television series at the same time to me Cindy is that weak, whiney at the same time precious, Mattheus seems to be one sandwich short at the same time the other manners had no substance. I had worked out who did it at the start, it was very obvious. That also seemed to be a lot of words destined to Cindy’s wardrobe – why? I don’t think I’ve ever data 1 hit before at the same time I’m a prolific reader, but this was dire. No plot, no substance, no suspense at the same time manners for you hoped would all meet a quick finish.
